Naan ennei Vida unnai than kadaliththen
Ennei vida unnaithan kavaniththen
Ennei vida unnaithan arvaniththen
Ithu ellawattrayum oru nodiyil Maranthuvittaye Èn???
Naan ellorayum vida unnaithane nesiththen
Ellorayum vida unnaithane ethirpaththen
Ellavatrayum vida unnaithane padukaththen.
Ore oru nodiyil ellawattrayum
Muttrilum Maranthuvittaye Èn..?
Translation
Why did you forget?
I loved you more than me
Cared for more than me
Consoled you more than me
You forgot all of these in just a second.. WHY?
My effection towards you was more than the others
My expectations towards you was more than the others
My protectiveness towards you was more than the others .
But still ,you entirely forgot about everything in just a second…WHY?
*My very first take on Tamil poetry.Might not sound so well or grammatically perfect since I haven’t mastered the literal side of it as yet.I’m Just an amateur with a bit of fluency in speaking, reading and understanding.. Pardon me if there’s any grammatical errors with the poem as well as the translation.
Sure Scribbles 
அருமை .👌👌🙂🙂
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Many Thanks😀😀.In fact I didn’t want to attempt this on Tamil text,where I’d really get confused with the N ‘s and L’s Hahaha…
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Tamil is easy to learn if you know the basic Shahz.If you practice reading you can catch up.👍👍
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Yes it is.. indeed!.Such a beauty when expressing emotions isn’t it 😊😊
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Yes,I too feel the same,it has been easy for me to express my emotions in Tamil than in English.Waiting for more Tamil poems from you.🙂🙂🙂
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Hahaha…God willing! my problem is thatI have to think and search for the appropriate Tamil word.Who knows maybe someday 😀😀 Have a nice day my friend😊
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This was amazing Ma’am. I wished I knew Tamil.
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Great..not so complicated Bheta.Better if you could honestly!!
Here in Sri Lanka we speak all three languages 😊
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I will someday Ma’am definitely. Maybe you can teach me. 😬:-)😍
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Oh yeah! Definitely..After mastering it myself 😉
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🙂
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Nice poem mam
Unn netri muthathil
Oru nodi pozhudhum alagai thondriyadhe
Enn vaalnaal muzhudhum udan irupai
Ena edhir nokki kaathirundhene
Anaithaiyayum poiyakki
Oru nodiyil vittu selvai
Ena ariyamal ponene
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Wow lovely !! Naan merasallagitten Jeni…😉 Romba Nandri 😍
Too bad I’ve got a long way to go in Tamil to write like that.Hope I would some day God willing!
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I really appreciate the efforts you put in to learn a language.it’s not easy to write a poem like this when you’re new to a language.you’ve done a good job mam.I also hope you write better than me one day because it’s just the second poem I tried.I just wrote it after reading yours.Btw I wrote my first poem in 7th standard.
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Hahaha.Jeni …no way…!! Lets see!!Thank you girl😍😍
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The efforts you put in to write a tamil poem made me think.I read tamil stories and listen to tamil songs but failed to write a poem.may be I should try that
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Oh!! How sad my dear…maybe you should very soon.😊Looking forward to it😍😍😍 Cheers!!
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Just a small dedication to you
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I really appreciate your gesture Jeni😍Thank you from the bottom of my heart😍
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Pleasure is mine 😊
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good one. 🙂 if it is in tamil font it will be more beautiful and we can make tamil strive even in didgital world.. i read your previous comments on how you get confuse with N and L .. but u can always google that and find ..
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Thank you Gowtham.Oh yeah!! That’s a real struggle for me.Sure! Will do.Thanks again for stopping by.Have a great week ahead 😊
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Nandru 👌
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Thank you.
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